Moriah Leila

I liked it. I was expecting something that followed the plot of the Harry Potter books and when that didn't happen I was so pleased. I mean other than pyhsical ...

I liked the story alot, very descriptive. And the little brother reminded me a lot of my little brother...Except he only dyes his eyebrows brown which is really weird.....Anyways it ...

I am very impressed. I thought you really delved into your character and let us see her inner workings. You made Amelia real to me, like she is an actual ...